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Fanfiction Idea

Sun Dec 6, 2009, 6:22 PM
  • Mood: Llama
  • Listening to: New Moon Soundtrack
So I'm actually going to try my hand at writing once again, even though I feel I fail for the most. I plan on writing a series of Twilight based fanfictions. Before you all freak out I'm not creating some fucking Sue who is gonna be in love with Edward or Jacob or some crap like that. In fact the only thing that really ties my characters to Twilight is the fact of how I will be portraying the werewolves and vampires, also that Jacob and the other members of the wolf pack appear later on in the story.

Now there is one thing people may call me a Sue for is that this story takes place some time after the Twilight saga. In my storyline something happens to Renesmee, haven't decided yet but its gonna have to be good and be believable. This is only the purpose of some kind of conflict in the story, like there won't be enough of that though.

I will be following the same style of writing as Meyers did. The first story will be written from the perspective of Jolie Pelletier, one of the main characters in this story. I can't say for certain how many perspectives this story will be written from simply because I don't know how many I will write, though one story will definitely be written from the perspective if Trent Lavoie, the other main character. I will be posting a few teasers here soon.

Now as far as titles go I'm going to also follow Meyers's style but I think I will use seasons rather than times of day.

The two main characters of the story are from Sooke, Canada (British Columbia). Its about three and a half hours away from Forks, WA.

Jolie 'Jo' Pelletier, is a white female who is 18 and in her senior year at Edward Milne Community School. She stands at no taller than 5'6" and athletically built. She has long hair down to her shoulder blades that is naturally a very pale blond, though once she transforms she keeps her hair cut in a very short and boyish manner. Jolie is a Quelute descendant, she is descended from one of the great chiefs of the Quelute tribe. The gene skipped every other generation, and landed on her. This was simply unknown because there had been no reason for the gene to activate itself, aka no vampires. She is very much unaware of her heritage. When Jolie transforms she is a large white wolf, granted she is not quite as large as the full blooded Quelutes. One thing that sets her apart is that since she is not full-blooded Quelute she seems to be excluded from the trait of shared thoughts. This is both a curse and blessing. While the rest of the pack can hear her thoughts, she in turn can't hear theirs which causes tension between her and the full blooded Quelutes at first. I may later add that as she stays around the pack more and more that starts to change.

Trent Lavoie, is a white male who is apparently 20 and Sophomore at University Canada West (Victoria Campus), he however is a vampire. He is stands around 6'-6'1" and is well muscled, not steroidy but toned. He was originally drawn as having short spiked hair but I have decided to change this, so he now has slightly long hair, just enough so it hangs down in his face, I really can't decide on a hair color though. Unlike the Cullens or any of the other vampires in the Twilight series, at least to my knowledge, he has blue eyes. When he is hungry they are a dark cobalt and when he has fed they're an ice blue. I have not yet decided if I will create a coven or not for him, more than likely I will. He will have a power, what it is right now, I do not know. Trent is the reason that Jolie transforms into a werewolf. While there is no actual college in Sooke, this where he will be from originally. He is more than likely going to be a graduate of the same school as Jolie attends at the beginning of the story.

Now here's the twist in the story, neither of them knows what the other is. Since Jolie's gene has not activated yet, he can't smell that she is a werewolf. Jolie is also unaware of what he is. Now some hardcore Twi-tards will probably says that she's a retard and no where near as smart as Bella, cause Bella figured it out. To this I would have to say, you're wrong. She is VERY intelligent, more so than Bella. The thing is that Trent does everything he can to NOT broadcast he's not human. He acts like everyone else and isn't all dark, brooding, and a total emofuck. Besides Jolie isn't a fucktard who ignores her surroundings so there would be no real reason for Trent to have to save her from being squished by a van. You probably wonder how Trent got off with being pale and cold and Jolie not getting suspicious. Well that's why I placed these two in CANADA, a heavily forested area at that! Its cold there! He also has very good and valid excuses for his being cold, very poor blood circulation, and being pale, he has a condition that makes it hard for him to go out in the sun, if he stays out in the sun for too long it will cause his skin to burn. Both are very real and believable conditions, Trent did his homework.

Now since Jolie is only part Quelute and her gene is dormant it takes longer for it to wake up in the presence of a vampire. The two date for about a year before she starts showing signs of transformation. It starts slowly at first, before it really starts Jolie begins to have nightmares about a white wolf attacking her boyfriend. Then she starts getting hot flashes, for lack of a better word. Once her body temperature goes up and stays up, she starts becoming irritable, which the couple at first thinks she might be pregnant cause Trent assumes its mood swings due to hormones, such was not the case. Even up to this point Trent still can't smell the werewolf on her. What causes her to finally transform is while the two of them are hiking. They get into a fight over something then boom. Poor Trent soon has a huge white wolf, that just seconds ago was his girlfriend, trying to eat his face.

It is after this that real story starts.

Basically I am presenting what I believe is a more true definition of star crossed lovers than Bella and Edward could ever be. Bella is human, sure that's what vampires eat, but its not like its wrong and unheard of in literature involving humans and vampires that the two species date. Plus a vampire can choose not feed on humans, as demonstrated in Twilight and I'm sure other works of fiction on this subject. Werewolves are the natural enemies of vampires and vice versa. That is a theme that is prevalent not just in Twilight but pretty much in every work of fiction where the two species are involved. Sure they can over come it but for the most part every story I've ever seen where a vampire and a werewolf become romantically involved there is ALWAYS some kind of uproar from either side or both.

So uh I'll be posting a teaser for the first story "Summer Snow" here soon. If any where during my writings you find errors (spelling, grammatical, etc) please tell me! Also I am open to critique. Because the more I get critiqued the better I will get.

"Is it possible to love the person I am designed to destroy?" - Jolie Pelletier

(I just realized this has got the be the LONGEST journal I have written... EVER.)

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What?

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you didnt read the artist comment on the picture you faved.

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Sorry! >.<

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its okay.. im just irritated because of people just favoriting and not giving their opinions on what they like about it.

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